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Not Here, Not Now
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Touched by your kiss
I sink into ecstasy
The feel of your lips
So soft, so gentle
Soon, you pull
Too suddenly, you leave
The heat dies away
Not here, not now
I touch you hand
Hoping for that amazing smile
You grab hold of mine
But you stand, cheering
I tap it again
Imapatient and wishing
You look at me with annoyance
Not here, not now
I ask, you repeat
My exasperation rises
Until I turn around
Leaving you confused
I sink into ecstasy
The feel of your lips
So soft, so gentle
Soon, you pull
Too suddenly, you leave
The heat dies away
Not here, not now
I touch you hand
Hoping for that amazing smile
You grab hold of mine
But you stand, cheering
I tap it again
Imapatient and wishing
You look at me with annoyance
Not here, not now
I ask, you repeat
My exasperation rises
Until I turn around
Leaving you confused
I wrote this out of sheer annoyance... and with a lot of crossing stuff out. It's not my favorite, in fact, I don't like it all that much. Must be the frusteration....
Let's all say "Yay!" for my anaphora use and 4 line stanzas! (If you haven't realized yet, I use this form A LOT!)
~ LoneMoonHunter
Let's all say "Yay!" for my anaphora use and 4 line stanzas! (If you haven't realized yet, I use this form A LOT!)
~ LoneMoonHunter
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